Mentorship request:
Help translate our tech solution into a consumer friendly story

Problem

We have been writing proposals and responses to RFPs/EOIs etc, and just seem not to be getting responses back, not even negative ones. I have also used free templates available online, but have not gotten better results.

We need to have our templates reviewed and edited, so that I can send out better written documents.

Request

I would like to get someone to review what we have written about our company, and about our main product – and help me to write a better document.

I can use it as a template for future responses. I am confident in what we have developed but just not sure I am describing it well enough.

I do understand that we may have to have 2 versions, 1 targeting non technical people and the other to tech savvy people. I need this urgently

Thanks

Asked on April 3, 2020


 
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